On Thursday Room 8 went to the wharf. It was the first time I'd been there. I was amazed because I felt that I was going to get a fish, but I didn't.
Next I went to get more bait because the fish ate my bait.
Then I felt a fish on my hook, but when I pulled my fishing rod up my bait was gone.
After that, I smelt my hands. They smelt like toxic gas. I said to myself "After this, I'm going to have a bath." I HAD FUN! I also saw lots of fishing rods and bait catchers.
3 comments:
did you get angry when the fish ate you bait?have you senn a fish eating bait?
Great writing, Sau. I brought all the fishing lines back to school in my car when the Junior School went fishing and my car still smells like toxic gas!
You have used some excellent words to describe your smells and feelings Sau - the day sounded like really good fun
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