Sione's Fishing Recount
Yesterday the whole senior syndicate marched to go fishing. I felt surprised and amazed all the parents came to help us. I saw the sea moving across the rocks and I saw a bridge that kept us safe. When I could not find my fishing rod, Miss Hansell told me to share with Darwin. Then me and Darwin were bored waiting. We marched back to school and walked past Dunkirk. I enjoyed going fishing.
3 comments:
Well done, Sione. I enjoyed reading your recount of the fishing trip. I wonder where your fishing rod was?
I like the way you told us how you were 'surprised and amazed at all the parents" who came to help you. We are very lucky that so many parents came on the trip.I am glad you got to share with Darwin.
LI FELT BORED TO.
THAT WAS STILL A NICE DAY.
DID YOU ENJOY IT.
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