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Friday, August 6, 2010

Richmond's Recount - Jungle Drums

On Thursday the 5th of August after a week of rainy lunchtimes, we met in the hall. When I was waiting for the rest of Room 8 students, I heard loud noises sounding as loud as a group of elephants. I felt so excited and amazed.

Once I got inside I felt hooked in to the rhythm. There was rows and rows of drums. As I saw everybody playing the drums, I picked the perfect drum just for me. Chewie said "Actions are louder than words." Ms Hansell said that it was a surprise. After that I went out of the hall. My body was exhausted and my hands were pink and red.

3 comments:

Manaiakalani said...

Hi Richmond - I am really curious about the drumming now I have read your recount and read that your hands were pink and red!! Wow, you must have done some amazing drumming. Did anyone record or video it?
Mrs Burt

Ms Hansell said...

Richmond, I really liked your opening sentence. I like the way you included..."...after a week of rainy lunchtimes..." It really hooked me in as a reader. Great to read.

Miss Hansell (Room 8) said...

Richmond - I like the way you said "Once I got inside I felt hooked in to the rhythm..." I wish I had been there!

From Miss Hansell