Friday, August 6, 2010

Corryna's Recount - Jungle Drums

Yesterday afternoon after lunch, we went upstairs and Miss Wilson said we have to get in a line and go downstairs to the hall. When we were walking, I heard some noise. As soon as we got there, I heard a loud noise. I felt confused and excited but I didn't know what was happening. When we went inside the walls were shaking and the ground was rumbling. I even saw rows and rows of drums all the way to the front of the stage. When we were playing the drums, I saw lots of smiling faces and I saw kids laughing. When we were finished, I was exhausted and my hands turned red.


Mrs Kelly said...

Great story, Corryna! You have used words that describe a happy, noisy, hot, fun afternoon!

Ms Hansell said...

Corryna, you have captured the concert really well. I agree with Mrs Kelly - you have used wonderful describing words and hooked in your reader well.

Miss Hansell (Room 8) said...

That must have been so exciting to see "rows and rows of drums" and I wish I had been there to have a go! You made it sound like a lot of fun!

From Miss Hansell