On Thursday at Teacher Read time, my friends and I had to go outside and line up. I was confused and my friends were too because I didn't know what was going on.
Then we lined up outside the hall. I was pumped up. I was nervous about what was happening. Then it was our turn to go in. I got a surprise! I saw drums and three people on stage. Then the other teacher told me to sit and play one of the drums. I was very happy.
After that I heard a stampede coming down and I got a headache. After that I was exhausted.
We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students from Tamaki Primary! Our teacher is Miss Morrison.
8 comments:
You have used some great words in your story - lots of feelings like - confused, pumped up, nervous, well done Cypress1
Cypress, I saw how hard you were drumming - and you captured it well - you WERE exhausted!! Glad you enjoyed it.
Congratulations to all Room 8 writers of the Jungle Drums stories. I am sitting at my kitchen table - your stories are entertaining my whole family!! Great vocabulary used in every story.
What an awesome surprise! It sounded like a lot of fun. Well done for organising your writing into paragraphs Cypress - you are so clever!
From Miss Hansell
Wow CYPRESS THIS Is so cool you have a good recount.from hine and shantai
Cypress i like your story. also it is very good.
well done cypress you used a lot of expressive words it was a very good story to read
This is a great recount cypres. I love the way your expressed yourself in your recount.
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