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Friday, August 20, 2010

Jayden's Fishing Day Recount


















On the remaining Thursday...  I felt nervous.  The whole senior syndicate went to the Panmure wharf.

After a while we got to the wharf.  My class were the first to go.  We got our bait catchers out and fishing rods.  When we started fishing, my mum gave me some bait.  Everyone was loud but, we had fun.

Then I saw some bait catchers floating away.  Then some people moaning and groaning.  They were sad.  I saw heaps of cracked wood.  The waves were vibrating, the wind was blowing and the bait was filled with a very, very horrible stink.  The water was smacking the wood like a horrible fight.  It was an amazing sight on the wharf.  

Finally, we walked back and I was very joyful.  Our progress wasn't that good at lining up, but, we had a great day.

When we got back we went home from the great day of fishing.

3 comments:

muatau said...

do you stiLL remaber that day it was fun;did you have fun

Mrs Kelly said...

Thanks for your great story, Jayden.It sounds like everyone had a great time.

Ms Hansell said...

Jayden, you have used some excellent words in your recount of the fishing trip. I especially liked the part that says "the waves were vibrating, the wind was blowing and the bait was filled with a horrible stink" You make me feel like i was there with you. Great work