Friday, August 6, 2010

Shantai's Recount - Jungle Drums

On Thursday we were walking to the hall and when I walked inside, my heart was pumping. Just when I got inside I wanted to run to the biggest drum. I also felt confused because we never go into the hall on Thursdays. When I sat down by my drum, it sounded like two elephants stomping. When the whole school was in the hall, we got to play the drums. My hands were stinging. I also got tired. Finally we went home and had dinner.


Ms Hansell said...

I loved reading your sentence ..."I felt surprised because we never go into the hall on Thursdays." That told me how much of a surprise you really got Shantai. Good recount.

Miss Hansell (Room 8) said...

Wow Shantai, I am so impressed by the way you compared the sound of your drum to two elephants stomping. What a clever simile!

Miss Hansell