We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students from Tamaki Primary! Our teacher is Miss Morrison.
Friday, August 6, 2010
Shantai's Recount - Jungle Drums
On Thursday we were walking to the hall and when I walked inside, my heart was pumping. Just when I got inside I wanted to run to the biggest drum. I also felt confused because we never go into the hall on Thursdays. When I sat down by my drum, it sounded like two elephants stomping. When the whole school was in the hall, we got to play the drums. My hands were stinging. I also got tired. Finally we went home and had dinner.
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2 comments:
I loved reading your sentence ..."I felt surprised because we never go into the hall on Thursdays." That told me how much of a surprise you really got Shantai. Good recount.
Wow Shantai, I am so impressed by the way you compared the sound of your drum to two elephants stomping. What a clever simile!
Miss Hansell
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