My feet were exhausted from the dancing. I had no more energy to go on and my red burnt hands were very thin. I had a fantastic day.
We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students from Tamaki Primary! Our teacher is Miss Morrison.
We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students from Tamaki Primary! Our teacher is Miss Morrison.
4 comments:
What an excellent sentence you used when you said....
"I was surprised by the rumbling walls." That's exactly what it sounded like!
Wow Muatau, I would have been tired from all that drumming too! Well done for organising your writing into paragraphs!
From Miss Hansell
I think this is a great recount Muatau. Your use of words and sentences shows you are really improving in your writing. I love it, and keep up the great writing.
thank you for commenting on my story Miss handsell
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