We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students from Tamaki Primary! Our teacher is Miss Morrison.
Friday, August 6, 2010
Ma'asi's Recount - Jungle Drums
On Thursday there were 3 drummers named Johnny, Lucy and Chewie. When I walked into the hall I felt excited, surprised and amazed. I was hooked in and I could feel my heart racing. There were big loud noises. The sounds were as loud as thunder. They were using body language and they gave us signals to instruct us. At the end of it, I was hot, tired and sweaty!
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3 comments:
I can tell by reading your story that you had a great time. Good choice of words, Ma'asi!
You have hooked in your readers beautifully Ma'asi. You used some good language to do this. Well done!
Wow Ma'asi, you are a pro with commas! You used very interesting words, well done!
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