I felt enthusiastic. I heard piles of laughter coming from everyone. It sounded like elephants stomping loudly and sounded like a stampede was going through the hall!
Johnny used so many signals we finally understood what he wanted done. At the end I had stinging red hands.
I never wanted to stop drumming because it was so much fun!
4 comments:
I really know what you mean about "elephants stomping loudly" - great imagery Mavis.
I like the way you used the word "march" instead of "went" because that made the recount really interesting to read. Well done for organising your writing into paragraphs too Mavis!
From Miss Hansell
mavis I never knew that you had outstanding words.
thank you Apiseka for weird and lovely comment
by mavis
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