We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students from Tamaki Primary! Our teacher is Miss Morrison.
Friday, August 6, 2010
Corryna's Recount - Jungle Drums
Yesterday afternoon after lunch, we went upstairs and Miss Wilson said we have to get in a line and go downstairs to the hall. When we were walking, I heard some noise. As soon as we got there, I heard a loud noise. I felt confused and excited but I didn't know what was happening. When we went inside the walls were shaking and the ground was rumbling. I even saw rows and rows of drums all the way to the front of the stage. When we were playing the drums, I saw lots of smiling faces and I saw kids laughing. When we were finished, I was exhausted and my hands turned red.
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3 comments:
Great story, Corryna! You have used words that describe a happy, noisy, hot, fun afternoon!
Corryna, you have captured the concert really well. I agree with Mrs Kelly - you have used wonderful describing words and hooked in your reader well.
That must have been so exciting to see "rows and rows of drums" and I wish I had been there to have a go! You made it sound like a lot of fun!
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