Dear Ms Hansell,
Do you think we should celebrate Matariki at school? I think we should.
Firstly it is important to the Maori culture to have their own new year celebration, and we don't actually have that many celebrations to celebrate in New Zealand.
Secondly it brings a fresh new start to the New Zealand culture.
Finally it will be great to celebrate all these things together because we will be able to get to know people better.
You can see from the evidence that we should celebrate Matariki at school.
From Jayden
7 comments:
Great writing Jayden, keep it up
Great writing JAYDEN from your MUM
Hi Jayden, I love the way you have provided "EVIDENCE" and summed up your persuasive writing at the end. Great persuading!
WOW Jayden you arr so in the spotlight of persuading people.I really liked how you said you can see from the evidince ...But you are the the star of persuasive writing.
BY Mavis
well done you have a good work that you have made i would celebrate matariki.by sharon
well done, you really showed me what a persuasive arguement is well done
by lyric
=)
I live in Ireland this blog made me feel homesick because I wish I could celebrate Matariki with you! Great stuff!
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