The Stand Up For Kids show was 100% funny because their jokes were hilarious! I felt excited because I have never been to a comedy show before. My favourite comedian was Andrew, the host. He was my favourite comedian because he was funny. My favourite joke was when Andrew listed all the words he wasn't allowed to say. You should go to the comedy show because it's funny!
We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students from Tamaki Primary! Our teacher is Miss Morrison.
21 comments:
I am glad you enjoyed your very first ever comedy show Darwin! A fantastic review.
:) Miss Hansell (Room 8)
You spoke with a clear voice Darwin and I enjoyed listening to you talk about your first ever comedy show. You used great describing words.
Ka pai Darwin!
Ms Aireen (Room 3)
I realy like your review
It was graet!
wow!Fantastic.
That was graet.
wow! Fantastic review darwin.
It was graet!
Darwin, I really liked your one very much. I really like your review, it was great.
From Sione
Wow, fantastic work Darwin. It was great. That was the best.
From Muatau
Darwin, I liked yours very much! It was fantastic!
From Richmond
you have really shown a great review.
it was great!
you have really shown a great review.
it was great!
*-DARWIN YOUR FANTASTIC STAND UP FOR KIDS SHOW WAS GREAT.FROM HINE
Dear Darwin YOU are FANTASTIC...by ETUATE
Dear Darwin YOU are FANTASTIC...by ETUATE
Dear Darwin YOU are FANTASTIC...by ETUATE
Hi Darwin,
I loved your review about the Stand Up For Kids Show. I was really improved by those fantastic words you used.
Love Mehi
what is your next step?
It was a good review.
from muatau
Hi Darwin! Great work. I really like your comedy show. Awesome Stuff! ;)
well
hi D arwin we like your story. keep it up.
DARWIN I LIKE YOUR WRITING. IT WAS FANTASTIC.
Great input and fun!!!
Thank you for sharing your message on blog. I am sure lot of other blog members are reading your review. Keep up the good work.
That was a brilliant report. I like how you used describing words. Well done!
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