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Wednesday, November 25, 2009

Sake's Poem about Fireworks


Gun powder sizzles
The sound is like electric stars flying through the air

It looks like a roller-coaster
Flying over the school
With shooting stars

A magic ball of fire
Zooming in the sky
And the sun glitters

2 comments:

Ori-Chan said...

This poem is AMAZING!

My favourite part is: "the sound is like electric stars flying through the air"

You describe the fireworks perfectly!

Excellent writing Sake!!

I hope I can see more of your writing on your classroom blog soon! I will keep checking EVERY day!

Ori-Chan (JAPAN)

ara tamaki said...

nice poem sake this ara