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Thursday, November 26, 2009

Jayden's Poem about Fireworks


Sparklers
A snakes tail
Zappy
Glowing
Crackly
A dragon's sneeze of sickness
Like a flare's sparkly end
They sparkle in the air
Like the sun's daughter
It smells like a fire place
Like magic

2 comments:

Ori-Chan said...

Wow Jayden! I LOVE your poem about fireworks!

My favourite part was "like a dragon's sneeze of sickness" ... you are a VERY talented writer! I am so impressed!

Keep up the amazing writing!

Oriana (in JAPAN)

Room10@Ptengland School said...

Kia Ora Jayden!
What a wonderful poem. You are so clever at using very descriptive language. Keep up the wonderful learning.

Miss Lavakula