Gun powder sizzles
The sound is like electric stars flying through the air
It looks like a roller-coaster
Flying over the school
With shooting stars
A magic ball of fire
Zooming in the sky
And the sun glitters
The sound is like electric stars flying through the air
It looks like a roller-coaster
Flying over the school
With shooting stars
A magic ball of fire
Zooming in the sky
And the sun glitters
2 comments:
This poem is AMAZING!
My favourite part is: "the sound is like electric stars flying through the air"
You describe the fireworks perfectly!
Excellent writing Sake!!
I hope I can see more of your writing on your classroom blog soon! I will keep checking EVERY day!
Ori-Chan (JAPAN)
nice poem sake this ara
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