Today was really interesting, because a HUGE helicopter landed on our huge, green, great, gorgeous grass! Suddenly, the helicopter door opened. We thought they were catching criminals! But, they were actually coming to the Tamaki kids. We all shouted “THANK GOODNESS!” 
Then we rushed around the helicopter like little squeaky mice. 
We stood in a semi-circle around the helicopter. Then we asked some very strange questions. But it didn’t really matter, because they answered our strange questions anyway. I didn’t know that a helicopter door could wriggle! The name of the helicopter that landed on our school grass was ‘POLICE ONE’. When it flew back to base, the blades twisted around in a circle as fast as the fastest human in history. That was the first helicopter I had ever seen in real life. I will never forget it!
Then we rushed around the helicopter like little squeaky mice. We stood in a semi-circle around the helicopter. Then we asked some very strange questions. But it didn’t really matter, because they answered our strange questions anyway. I didn’t know that a helicopter door could wriggle! The name of the helicopter that landed on our school grass was ‘POLICE ONE’. When it flew back to base, the blades twisted around in a circle as fast as the fastest human in history. That was the first helicopter I had ever seen in real life. I will never forget it!
5 comments:
wow what an insightful description! what a lucky school having a helicopter!
that is sooooo cool!!
CoOl!!! wish I could have had a helicopter at my school when I was at primary! you guys must have so much fun in room 8!
superb writing Room 8 - i have your poems on my office display wall. It is hard to believe you are such great writers at only 7 and 8 years old. You are famous! From Ms Hansell
Hi Ofa,
I very loved your blog that you post and it look's sooo cool!!!. Keep up the great work awesome
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