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Wednesday, August 26, 2009

In My Magic Box

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In my magic box

there is a lime and gold strawberry valley
with gumdrops that fall from the skies when it rains

The birds in my valley are aqua and violet
when my birds fly, they make a range of ice cream clouds
like soft marshmallows

When an aeroplane goes by
it flashes amazing colours like a disco ball
and lights up the sky

My dark red, black and orange vines are like fire
I cuddle up in my furry webs
I eat special mango leaves

When it is dawn, the egg cracks
and splashes the speedy sun out like flaming water
that rises through the blow-holes

The colours of my fish are baby blue
they dart through and they catch lightning scales
like a flashing rainbow

My valley in my magic box.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wow! This is such an imaginative poem. Your magic box sounds like a wonderful fantasy land :)

coco said...

All these awesome poems and stories! I can't wait to see what you kids do next!

Hayley J. said...

All these great poems and stories are really opening up my own imagination! thanks kids! you make the internet exciting!

Joanna said...

Hi Teresa-Mae,
This is a beautiful poem. I especially love your description of the dawn. I have never heard anyone describe the dawn quite like this. It is a magic time of day and you have brought back that magic with your words.