In my magic box
there is a lime and gold strawberry valley
with gumdrops that fall from the skies when it rains
The birds in my valley are aqua and violet
when my birds fly, they make a range of ice cream clouds
like soft marshmallows
When an aeroplane goes by
it flashes amazing colours like a disco ball
and lights up the sky
My dark red, black and orange vines are like fire
I cuddle up in my furry webs
I eat special mango leaves
When it is dawn, the egg cracks
and splashes the speedy sun out like flaming water
that rises through the blow-holes
The colours of my fish are baby blue
they dart through and they catch lightning scales
like a flashing rainbow
My valley in my magic box.
4 comments:
Wow! This is such an imaginative poem. Your magic box sounds like a wonderful fantasy land :)
All these awesome poems and stories! I can't wait to see what you kids do next!
All these great poems and stories are really opening up my own imagination! thanks kids! you make the internet exciting!
Hi Teresa-Mae,
This is a beautiful poem. I especially love your description of the dawn. I have never heard anyone describe the dawn quite like this. It is a magic time of day and you have brought back that magic with your words.
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