‘Eagle One’ was at Tamaki Primary today. I felt really spoilt to have them come to our school! They came on the 31st of July, 2009 – a Friday. They came to help us learn about TAKE OFF.
The helicopter was like wind smashing the ice. This helicopter was shaped like a fish. I felt amazed by how this helicopter moved and flew.
I was surprised to hear that the helicopter can go up to 1000ft! That’s even higher than a troll!
By Teresa-Mae, Room 8
5 comments:
I really enjoyed reading about your helicopter surprise! I will keep popping into your blog room 8 to read more posts!
From Oriana :)
WOW thats MEEEEEAN! especially when you said "TAKE-OFF"! sooo cool!
I like your similies and facts.You must have learnt alot.
WELL DONE
Hi Teresa
I liked your similies for your helicopter story and punctuation.
WELL DONE KEEP IT UP
From Picilla
nice writing teresa keep your work up and be good
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