We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students from Tamaki Primary! Our teacher is Miss Morrison.
Tuesday, May 8, 2012
Loni's Weekend Recount
In my weekend, I went to spend my weekend at my papa‘s house. I played with my friends and I met new friends too. We played hide and seek. I had the best hiding place! I hid in the tree! I was laughing in the tree. Maopa gave up! I jumped down from the tree and papa called us for dinner and we had KFC. It was beautiful!
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4 comments:
Great writing, Loni. Sounds like you had a busy weekend. Hiding in the tree was a good idea!
Hi Loni, I think you wrote a good story, you had a good hiding spot. You can be a good writer one day.Good work.
From Starr.
HI Loni, I really enjoyed your weekend story. it was a really nice story to read I really liked the way that you put heaps of punctuation.
Ashton
Hi loni, I like your story about your weekend you have a interesting story.I think you had a good hiding spot.
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