Friday, March 19, 2010

Darwin's Mountain Water - Persuasive Writing

Buy your Mountain Water!

It's very satisfying, fresh, healthy and it's cold.

Mountain Water keeps you hydrated.

First you drink it, then you buy it!

If you think you need more - buy more today!


Puawai said...

Hi Room8,
I think your story was great because you used lots of interesting words. That was fantastic. I like drinking water too.

By Puawai

kara said...

Yummy, this story makes me want to drink your fresh mountain water and especailly when i am playing lots of sports! Good work Darwin, i cant wait to see more great work from Room 8:) Miss Coster