Friday, February 19, 2010

Darwin's Persuasive Writing

Should we have a monkey in Room 8?

Most people would agree that we should not have a monkey in Room 8 because it might break things.

Only a fool would think that they should have a classroom monkey. We all know that monkeys aren't sensible because they might cut our hair.

The truth is that monkeys are very difficult to stop from climbing things.

Here are two reasons why monkeys can't go to school...first, they might break things and my last reason is they might snatch your banana.

We can see from the evidence that we should not have a monkey in Room 8.

1 comment:

Tamaki Primary School said...

I agree with you Darwin a monkey would make a terrible mess at school and I have heard that they bite!!! A great piece of writing.
From Mrs Kelly