On Tuesday Room 8, Room 7, teachers and helpers went to the Tip Top factory. First we went down stairs. We had a meeting about the trip to the Tip Top factory. When the bus arrived at T.P.S, we went in the bus.
When we got to the Tip Top factory we were all excited. We had morning tea. After that Room 8 met Paula. She was the lady who showed us the factory. We saw lots and lots of machines making ice-cream and cheesecake. I saw a machine called a 'Homogeniser'. It pushes the ice-cream to make it smoother. When we went through the clouds room it smelled like ice-cream. Next we went to the movie room and picked an ice-cream and watched a movie about the Tip Top factory.
After that we went back outside and had a photo taken. Then the bus came and we went back to school. I feel that I want to go back to the Tip Top factory again.
13 comments:
OMG!!!! youre amazing your better than sam
well done Charday what a great story
about your tip top trip it sounded
like you had so much fun.
youre recount is amazin. i think you like the part when you ate ice cream.
from darwin
Ummmm jayden i think thats kind of weired. my favourite part is when you saidNext we went to the movie room and picked an ice-cream and watched a movie about the Tip Top factory.
Great work Charday - I am so sad that I didn't get to go to the Tip Top Factory. Ice cream ....mmmmmmmmmmmm
it looks like a nice trip there.i wish i was there to itn some ice cream.
Hi,
Your really lucky to go to the Tip Top Factory!I wish I could go there.What was your favourite part of the trip?
The photo makes my tummy rumble.
From Amy at Grey Lynn School.
Hi,
Your really lucky to go to the Tip Top Factory!I wish I could go there.What was your favourite part of the trip?
The photo makes my tummy rumble.
From Amy at Grey Lynn School.
Hi Charday,
That was a great recount about your trip to the Tip top factory. It sounded like you had a lot of fun. I look forward to reading some more of your writing.
nice story hope you have great day :)
Hello looks so cool that you went to tip top factory
What a great recount Charday! You gave such great detail that I almost feel like I was there!...That's right I was.
Keep up the good learning!
Good work Charday. It sounds like you had a lot of fun at the Tip Top Factory. I look forward to read more of your work.
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