Jayden's Persuasive Writing

Should we have a monkey in Room 8?

I believe we should bring a monkey to school. We could bring equipment to school like glass boxes with a key to lock them in, so they don't rip our clothes.

My second reason is when it's eating time or lunch, we can lock them in a cage so they can't eat our bananas. They can eat their own lunch.

My third reason is they can think our playground is a tree, they are friendly. My result is they can make friends. They make a little bit of friends in the zoo because they are lonely and little monkeys.

We all know that monkeys are harmless. Don't you think we should bring monkeys to school?

Darwin's Persuasive Writing

Should we have a monkey in Room 8?

Most people would agree that we should not have a monkey in Room 8 because it might break things.

Only a fool would think that they should have a classroom monkey. We all know that monkeys aren't sensible because they might cut our hair.

The truth is that monkeys are very difficult to stop from climbing things.

Here are two reasons why monkeys can't go to school...first, they might break things and my last reason is they might snatch your banana.

We can see from the evidence that we should not have a monkey in Room 8.