tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2858266648366205900.post6016531923350051069..comments2023-06-15T03:04:04.360+12:00Comments on Room 8 @ Tamaki Primary: Mavis Describes Her Beautiful PlaceUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2858266648366205900.post-52750052174450024862011-11-11T10:42:58.612+13:002011-11-11T10:42:58.612+13:00Mavis, I love your use of alliteration to keep the...Mavis, I love your use of alliteration to keep the reader hooked in your writing. You have an amazing imagination! Your beautiful place seems like an exciting place. <br /><br />Your VERY proud teacher, <br />Miss KylaMiss Kylahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03513924264112982215noreply@blogger.com